too much autotune.. There's a limit, and you crossed it. I don't like the phaser on your voice either, maybe better in an electronic song this would sound great, but not rap. =/
theres not one phaser in this whole song so i'd prolly learn some shit before i give people bad reviews....
i don't understand...
how come NG artists always wanna diss someone? That's not what rap is about... It's just all become, the same...
I give a 4 for the beat...
No no no no no...
omg why? I'm sorry, but why? In all honesty this should've never been done. It sounds like it was done from the music creater off of Mario Paint.. Sorry man, idk how the rating is so high, but it's just... bad ='[
Ok, thanks wonderful.
Now how bout you fuck off, or read the 2nd to last review?
Ya, this is terrible.
Yes, I'm going to upload a better version soon.
Lyrics and flow were raw
But the beat doesn't fit
bro.. too smooth man. everything's great. good piece of work dred.
Wish there was a beat...
Man, pretty good brah. hot melody, but i REALLY wish there was a physical beat in the back instead of the vocal beat. I wouldn't suggest staying on NG too long dred. Not a good place to start. try Wemix.com or of course, myspace. Best of luck. keep it up.
Haha, yeah, my ghetto beatboxing isn't there yet. It's a style I really dig though, I'm trying to develop a sound that isn't as flaccid as this one. I'd really like to start complementing it with some drums, I'm always fooling around trying to find what works. Thanks for the advice too, I appreciate it!
i wouldn't concider this hip hop
I dont see how it isnt
Didn't like the beat
I've already heard MUCH better shit on NG with the same sample. RE-RUN
lol. There's obviously NO bias or cynicism there.
Once again, if you're not giving constructive criticism, then you probably don't know what the fuck you're talking about, and as such, I don't care what you say.
Hahaha. Fuck off.
I've always loved your beats dred. You definately know how to drop a track and spit some fire.
You so raw dred. I love your flows my n***a. hey you make your own instros or you get 'em from somewheres?
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